Disclaimer: I've been organizing my files in my laptop and found some school stuff i'd like to share to the world. Some of them have been posted already in my previous blog. I just think it's timely and fitting for the season. lols.
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Renunciation-is a piercing Virtue-
The letting go
A Presence-for an Expectation-
Not now-
The putting out of Eyes-
Just Sunrise-
Lest Day-
Day's Great Progenitor-
Outvie
Renunciation-is the Choosing
Against itself-
Itself to justify
Unto itself-
When larger function-
Make that appear-
Smaller-that Covered Vision-Here-
Poem 745, “Renunciation—is
a piercing virtue—“, tries to tell us how pain plays a necessary role in
one’s life. The pain of loss or of lacking enhances our appreciation of victory
or success. Moreover, the pain of separation indicates the degree of our desire
for union with another being or thing.
First, the persona in the poem could be someone who wanted to
let go or renounces something she already have for a need of something or someone.
But most probably the persona is a female since Dickinson’s secluded life could
only give her a female point of view which is also apparent in her other poems
And the addressee is not any particular person that could be named.
In the first line of the poem, Dickinson has already established
the main thought of her poem. She has posed the gist or the general picture
which will be put into detail on the lines after it.
Lines 2-3 could mean that the persona wanted to let go of her
present situation for something or perhaps someone she expects that would make
her present situation better.
Lines 4-9 may imply that before one must let go of the present,
the decision to be made must be thought of very well for fear that the days
would wither out and the chance would be lost. The phrase ‘Not now’, in line 4 suggests to think twice before making the
decision and ’Just sunrise’ signifies
the passing of time. We can see in line 5, ‘the
putting out of eyes’, which is a kind of synecdoche may well connote that
the persona suggests to the addressee to have a foreshadowing or a vision of
the consequences of his or her renunciation. It may also suggest the use of the
rationale or reason instead of just the senses.
Like in her other poems, she also used a
lot of dashes to replace comma or period to emphasize her points in the poem.
Lines 10-13 imply that in letting go, the question is not
whether to let go of A for B but rather, the better question is whether to do
it or not. ‘Itself’ in line 11
pertains to renunciation. It perhaps signifies that the action will be
justified if the addressee would refute renouncing when the function or the
means for doing so is much more important--making renunciation appear smaller
or less important. And that would cover whatever vision one may have.
Therefore, renunciation
is indeed a piercing virtue. It is piercing in a sense that it could be
painful. Like poking the skin with a needle or like piercing an earring to an
ear, it penetrates into the skin swiftly and leaves an excruciating feeling.
The only good thing about this is that, after the painful feeling is lost, only
the beauty of the earrings will be left. And I think that is how Emily
Dickinson makes letting go a virtue.
*9/12/07 07:31 pm - i felt a funeral in
my brain (i really did)
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